by Lauren Scott
Stones of burdens can seem like pebbles
barely tripping us up in our routines,
but sometimes, they’re boulder massive,
sliding us deeply into our heads
when the need to escape
from our own selves
becomes vital for our sanity.
We pause in our footsteps,
holding our breath, fighting tears
pushing as fiercely as a category five,
but then our eyes look out the window
following sunlight, focusing on the frost
hanging on tips of tree branches
as though adorned by sparkling jewels…
they wink at us
and those boulders shrink to pebbles,
with the sweetness of air
we inhale new life,
burdens we exhale
so we can breathe in miracles surrounding us –
in those who hold our hearts,
in every sight, every bloom, every sound…
How liberating to feel such buoyancy!
© Lauren Scott
A beautiful poem Lauren. Congratulations my friend
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Thanks so much, Sadje! I’m glad you loved this poem, and I appreciate your support very much. ❤️
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Thanks so much, Manuela, for publishing my poem. I appreciate being part of your wonderful literary site. ❤️
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You are more than welcome and thank you for being part of it, Lauren! ❤️
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[…] rest of the poem can be read here, and as always, a BIG THANKS to all of you for your wonderful […]
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Aww. This is a soaring poem. I feel elevated as I read. Thanks and congratulations to you. Lovely title too. Blessings, Laura.
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Thanks for your lovely words, Selma. I’m delighted this poem had such a positive effect on you. ❤️
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Hi Lauren, a lovely poem about coping mechanisms and overcoming adversity.
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Thanks very much, Robbie. I appreciate your lovely words and support. ❤️
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Great title! Beautiful vision!!
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Thanks for your lovely words, Annette, and for taking the time to comment here. ❤️
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Such an uplifting poem, I loved it
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A very beautiful poem, Lauren. How wonderful that it is shared so widely for others to savour!
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Thanks again, Steve! I appreciate you coming over here, and I hope my words help anyone who is weighted down by burdens the size of boulders. ❤️
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Nice poem Lauren! 🌻
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Thank you, Maria! 💞
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Congratulations on a wonderful poem, Lauren!
I love the depth of the poem exploring all of the facets of life metaphorically and so relatable❣️
Bravo❣️
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Thanks so much, Cindy! I appreciate your wonderful insight and I’m so glad you loved this poem. ❤️🌺
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You’re so very welcome, Lauren. I sure did
❣️🙌🏽🌹
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💞🌺🙏
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What a beautiful poem, Lauren!
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Thanks so much, Dawn! ❤️
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This is definitely a Lauren poem.
All of her works are brilliant, even when she tackles something harsh or sad.
I’m a huge fan. Thank you for featuring her here!
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Hi Resa, you are so kind! Thank you for commenting over here and for your most encouraging words. I’m so happy you’re a fan! ❤️❤️
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I am a fan, so you best keep writing! ❤️😘❤️😘❤️
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I will now! 🥰❤️🥰❤️🥰
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