She was protected from the beginning.
The golden child, revered for being herself, unapologetic, unafraid, her heart comparable to heavy lead.
Nothing could penetrate it. No emotion was strong or daring enough to live in its depths. There was only darkness, the kind that swallowed whole without a pause or a breath.
She grew in the shadows of defiance but was decently labelled as assertive, a girl who knew what she wanted and would go to any lengths to get it.
Her father passed before her eighteenth birthday, her mother became a memory herself, swept away from sight, confined to a room with no windows, forgotten and remembered as the girl desired.
She had been a daddy’s girl from the beginning.
And her father’s work required concentration, little interference. She followed in his footsteps, breaking the law, dodging death, punishing those who contradicted her. There was beauty in bloodshed, an irresistible aroma to it.
She wasn’t a vampire nor any type of monster, simply a girl finding her way in the world, marking her path with red yet it was impossible to find her.
They searched high and low, cities, towns, and villages, but no one spoke a word for or against her. Some swore they had never heard of her, she was a myth, one of those urban legends.
But the dead never lie, and her wrath sealed their truths in the wounds upon their bodies. But who would call her out or reveal her true identity?
Perhaps a person seeking to die in a more grotesque manner.
The girl survived, the girl thrived, the girl died, mercilessly killed, her body found near a swamp, a hole in her chest, her heart missing.
It’s to be heard that her heart lives on inside the body of her sworn enemy, a man who wished to know what it’s like to have a heart of lead.
Dense and unsympathetic.
But those are my thoughts and who really cares what a senile woman like me thinks.
I’m the mother who now pretends she never had a daughter.
Yay! Okay, this one caught me off-guard. I didn’t see the end coming. Nice change of direction, Terveen. 🙂 I love horror, and this fits the mold perfectly. What a romp through the darkness! Well done! 🙂
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Thanks so much, Mike. The depths of a dark mind are fascinating. I believe we all have a dark side to us. It just depends how much control we choose to have over it. *deep throated laughter.
Haha!
Take care. 🙂
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Wow, am speechless. How adroitly you weave in the twist at the end. No ‘ from darkness take me to the light ,’ it’s just what it is. Well done Terveen.👏🏼👏🏼👌🏼
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Thanks so much, Diti, for the lovely and appreciative comment. May the light keep getting through. Wish you the best. 🙂
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When a girl stays strong, learns to say no, learns to give back, and learns to protect herself ( self defence), that’s enough.🙂
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Very well said, Jane. Everyone beware!
Thanks so much. 🙂
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This story held my attention and surprised me! It’s also a wonderful piece of poetic prose.
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Thank you so much, Barbara.
Surprises are good for the heart and mind…even dark ones. Really appreciate it. 🙂
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Didn’t see the end coming. Cleverly executed, Terveen. You go dark in very intriguing ways…
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Thanks so much, Britta.
Dark is very intriguing.
So much to be discovered and discarded. 🙂
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[…] One of those Urban Legends by Terveen Gill — Gobblers & Masticadores […]
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Good heavens……
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Looks like a hellish situation. Thanks Don. Well said. 🙂
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Dense & unsympathetic and I was prepared for the worst, but the ending caught me off guard:)
A good twist to the story, Terveen.
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Thank you so much, Shobana.
A twist in the dark is something I really like. Take care. 🙂
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Amazing write, awesome ending, Terveen. 😊
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Thank you so much, Jeff. I really appreciate it. Take care and wish you the best. 🙂
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truly excellent, Terveen ❤
~David
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Thank you, David. Wish you the best and hope the coming year brings you and your near and dear much joy, peace, and good health. 🙂
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you too ❤
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Excellent! I have heard it said that the Golden Child ends up as a narcissistic individual and the scapegoat children end up being “Empaths”.
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Very true, Tamara. It’s a despairing situation, but one must face it and move forward with faith and hope. I pray that you’re well and I wish you the best always. Take care of yourself. 🙂
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♥️♥️♥️
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ah, love this!
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Thanks so much, Joseph. Appreciate it. 🙂
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Difficult to pretend, right?
Happy New year Terveen.
🙏🏻
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I guess no matter how difficult the child, a mother’s heart retains its warmth. Happy new year, Brian. I wish you well. Thanks. 🙂
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WOW!
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Thanks a lot, Dawn. 🙂
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Wonderfully told, Terveen. Urban legends continue to provide inspiration.
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They really do, Geoff. That fine edge of what if…and the lessons which will never be learnt. Haha. Thank and take care. 🙂
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