I gaze, the dusk glows with colour Sky fell in love was a rumour Attracts me your sense of humour I came from afar tattooed name Did this to prove love and gain fame Grief washed away in a light rain Tears came down at the thought of pain The door of soul open honey For the fragile pure mind of me Can't sleep, my mind flies like a bird Can't speak, tongue doesn't say a word The heart is wet enough with love The sky showered love from above Nature nurtured love, began to love A blush on both cheeks, no one knows Pure love follows love and only grows Passion started to feel today Breath caught in you but did not say The wise say, love does not expand Ages blame love, yet lover holds hand Love for you will never finish This is the first and the last wish Drive me crazy, I'm lost in you No hint of the hiccups, quite true It goes both ways, is not untrue Nice to see you again, I'm thrilled Desires of the soul are fulfilled You boost me to write, you are smart You will remain always in heart Here and there I see your image For this avoid people in village I will always be your soulmate Do not know what's written in fate ©️ Jane Aguiar Pic credit:The incredible world ⭐ The poem above is a LaCalma syllabic poem: Rhyme scheme: aaa,bB,cc,dd,bB 8 syllables per line in iambic tetrameter 11 lines per stanza. 3 stanzas(33lines) total Content must be nurturing, spiritual site:https://meandmyliterature.wordpress.com/
Good afternoon and thank you so very much for publishing my poem, Juan 🙂
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Saludos! j.
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Quite a creative piece of writing, Jane. Well done. -)
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Thank you for appreciation, Terveen!🙂 Glad you liked dear ❤️
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i see.
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“Pure love follows love and only grows” How wonderfully true. Amazing write, dear Jane. ❤️
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Thank you so very much, dear Jeff! Glad you like it ❤️
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This is breathtaking work Jane. I feel I know it so well. That’s how beautifully you’ve written it. Deep and true.
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Thank you for appreciation! Glad you liked it. 😊
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